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Endless Rain Forgotten Abyss 1 by ~dougurasu:icondougurasu:

Categories Literature > Prose > Fiction > Fantasy

©2008-2009 ~dougurasu
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You might have to press download to read it :S don't know why

Oh gooooood finally :o I was so hyping this thing up and I think it was well worth the wait :o I'd almost call it epic!

It's... maybe a bit 12+ or maybe even 16+ here and there, so watch out and be prepared for it :p




READ THE NEXT PART AFTER READING THE STORY


- Just for the sake of so you know it for sure. If the Chi tribe wasn't killed then Moyasu didn't find the Crystal before Hitori did. In fact here she finds it as the last one :p
- Oh god, we have so much characters on Endless Rain that the only think I know what to do with them is kill them :p As this is not really part of the Endless Rain universe (or IS it? :p) I'm allowed to kill anyone I want :p But it's more me making room for characters that haven't shined yet.
- The death toll is now at: 5. In order: Jishuku, Youji, Zesshou, Wevli and Hitori. It WILL rise :p
- I was planning on making this part end later in the story, but at 12 pages I though, wow... I need to cliffhanger this shit :p I already had a cliffhanger, but maybe this one is more effective :p

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~jiakko Jul 31, 2008, 11:58:40 AM
I don't see anything. D:

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~dougurasu Jul 31, 2008, 12:00:34 PM
press download :p

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Spock: "No..."
Q: "Ha! So it has to be that lob-sided dougnut thing."
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Q: "Been there, done that, got the T-Shirt."
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~jiakko Jul 31, 2008, 12:01:42 PM
okay!

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~jiakko Jul 31, 2008, 12:03:37 PM
the downward spiral is a nine inch nails album!

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~dougurasu Jul 31, 2008, 12:15:34 PM
it's also an economical term :D

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Q: "You and the Enterprise weren't thrown back in time accidentally, were you?"
Spock: "No..."
Q: "Ha! So it has to be that lob-sided dougnut thing."
Spock: "Ah, the Guardian of Forever. Do you know it?"
Q: "Been there, done that, got the T-Shirt."
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~jiakko Jul 31, 2008, 12:55:53 PM
:D, I knew that too!

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~BlondeTeraesa Aug 1, 2008, 1:07:19 AM
Wow... never saw so much death in an Endless Rain story... except when I killed off the whole Chi tribe, of course... xD

I liked it... very interesting.

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~dougurasu Aug 1, 2008, 4:40:39 AM
lol yeah :p true, but it's only to get those more populair characters out of the way to make room for other people :p like Shuhan, Mariko and Hana :p Thanks for liking :D It'll get even more awesome! :o

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Q: "You and the Enterprise weren't thrown back in time accidentally, were you?"
Spock: "No..."
Q: "Ha! So it has to be that lob-sided dougnut thing."
Spock: "Ah, the Guardian of Forever. Do you know it?"
Q: "Been there, done that, got the T-Shirt."
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~BlondeTeraesa Aug 1, 2008, 5:57:36 AM
Blah, Mariko gets enough attention already... First as the mysterious helper, then as the Sendo leader, then as the Sendo exile and newest Mikomi tribe member...

Oh well... your story. ;)

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